I got really positive feedback from my previous elevator pitch so I figured I'd reupload that same one for this assignment (please don't hate I've had a really busy week and I figured this would be fine seeing as I didn't have to change anything about my video ok have a great weekend!).
I can appreciate the way you kept on giving yourself a positive outlook on who you are and what you have to contribute to others. Knowing your own value is a big part of this assignment and I think that any employer could see this. In my own situation, I am fighting the battle of keeping retail stores relevant in a world of online ordering. The skills I have need to be built around that premise.
ReplyDeleteI agree! You did not have to change anything! Great post Karina and it is great you feel so confident about your elevator pitch!
ReplyDeleteGreat job and good luck!
Your pitch clearly hit all of the points that you needed to, and flowed smoothly. My main concern is the delivery. Although you spoke clearly and used good hand motions, you did not seem interested in the pitch. How can you expect an investor to be excited about your product when you, the creator, is not? My advice would be to speak slightly slower and emphasize the more important phrases with your facial expression and tone. Apart from that I believe you have the potential to make a great pitch based on how well versed you are on the subject and how calm you are during the delivery.
ReplyDeleteHi Karina! I appreciate the confidence you have by just re uploading the pitch. It has been tough to do this assignment with the lack of feedback and it feels like recording it again doesn't facilitate improvement. You did a great job of confidently getting your idea across and explaining your pitch clearly. Great job!
ReplyDelete